At first glance, my heart starts to dance
I'm up so high
Right next to the stars
It almost feels like i'm a butterfly
But just without the grass
I can't believe i'm on the moon
It's like a dream come true
Goodbye dusty moon, i'll see you soon
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Malo e lelei Ana,
ReplyDeleteI hope you have been enjoying your summer break and have been getting a lot of sum and rest! I am so excited to be back to work to be reading your blog posts!
I really enjoyed reading your blog post this morning about how you would feel if you were in Neil Armstrong's shoes, being the first human to land on the moon. What an awesome poem you have put together, the rhyming you have used is spot on and paints a vivid image in the reader's head about what you have written.
I really like the line “I can’t believe I'm on the moon, it’s like a dream come true”. It makes going to the moon feel like a real treat! If you travelled to the moon, what is something that you would take with you and leave on the moon as a memoir?
Keep up the hard work, I look forward to reading more of your blog posts!
Kueni :)